Intertwined Madnesses

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Like the wine we sipped

Moments before,

Just moments before,

Her raven hair lay spilled

Across my silken pillows

The shade of pearls;

And again, and again,

I ran my hands through them;

Our madnesses intertwined,

Like creepers and slithery serpents

On monsoon nights.

 Written for dVerse Poets Pub, Quadrille 11

 

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21 thoughts on “Intertwined Madnesses

    • Sreesha Diva July 4, 2016 / 11:19 PM

      Indeed, it can be 🙂
      Thanks for reading!

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  1. whimsygizmo June 14, 2016 / 9:42 PM

    I love the use of repetition here. It’s so tempting not to repeat words when word count is limited, but you have done so here so beautifully.

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  2. Grace June 14, 2016 / 9:54 PM

    I like the sensual spilling specially: Our madnesses intertwined!

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    • Sreesha Diva July 4, 2016 / 11:20 PM

      Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading! 🙂

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    • Sreesha Diva July 4, 2016 / 11:23 PM

      That’s an interesting interpretation, Sarah! Thanks for reading!

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Rosemary Nissen-Wade June 19, 2016 / 1:38 PM

    Lovely and sensual, sweetly romantic.

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