Would You?

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If you repeated,
that heaven you despise
If I pretended,
that the sun of happiness will rise,
Maybe I am a liar hardened,
but would you believe me anyway?

You say the path you tread,
meanders around treacherous chasms,
I am afraid, the sense of danger is deep red,
My heart beats with brave spasms,
I see you hesitate,
but would you take me with you anyway?

If you insisted,
that your soul breathed in hell
with demons in your head,
your fury you couldn’t foretell
Would you let me, let this be said,
love you anyway?

 

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17 thoughts on “Would You?

    • Sreesha Diva February 9, 2016 / 9:44 PM

      With your sense of humor, Doc, I don’t doubt it at all! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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    • Sreesha Diva February 9, 2016 / 9:45 PM

      And to wait for the answers! Sigh!

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    • Sreesha Diva February 9, 2016 / 9:45 PM

      Oh, it’s that time of the year!!

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  1. Shailaja V February 9, 2016 / 9:41 PM

    Fiery love in all its passionate glory. I love the interplay of dark obsession and romance, Sreesha!

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    • Sreesha Diva February 9, 2016 / 10:04 PM

      So glad you liked it, Shai! Thanks!!

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  2. pixie February 10, 2016 / 11:25 AM

    That was beautiful! I enjoyed the word play πŸ™‚

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  3. Rajlakshmi February 11, 2016 / 5:50 AM

    Sigh… How casually you have thrown in let this be said followed by the most beautiful words anyone would like to hear. Loved your style of writing.

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    • Sreesha Diva February 17, 2016 / 10:32 PM

      So glad you caught that tone and my intention so accurately!! ❀ ❀ ❀

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    • Sreesha Diva February 17, 2016 / 10:32 PM

      Thank you, Prathibha! πŸ™‚

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  4. Nibha March 23, 2016 / 9:28 PM

    Woah! Intense promise of love?? Lucky is the one who hears such words

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