Micro-Fiction – 12

We knew he’d return someday. One night, I heard my mother screaming and I knew he was back. It was time for him to claim another victim.


Maybe this isn’t our time and maybe love isn’t always enough. Perhaps when the time is right, it will be, and I hope we meet again…


With time,the pain will seem easier to bear. But the axe that killed you – that will be stuck in your chest for all eternity as a reminder.


She could’ve shot him. Instead she decided to chop him. Fingers first, one by one. Oh! The joy of watching him die a slow, painful death.


For a long time I stood listening to the waves.

After a while, the breeze stopped carrying the screams. I’m lucky, no one rescued her.


“There is a way out. But of course, it isn’t free.”
She hesitated, “Tell me.”
The devil grinned,”You’ve to leave all your joys here.”


That creep-up-your-neck feeling, every time I crossed that particular tombstone, that had the these words inscribed, “Still watching you.”


The quiet bothered me more than the cold. The arrival of others should’ve comforted me. But that’s when I realized – I was in the morgue.


“You don’t know my mother,” she said “When she smiles like that, it’s the calm before the storm. Before the children begin to vanish.”


They warned me, I didn’t listen. It felt so peaceful in the woods.
But it came out after dusk,screeching,wailing.
Now I’m trapped forever.


“That simmering fear is your conscience.It wont be long before you explode and confess.”
“But… I didn’t commit the murders.”
“I know.”



12 thoughts on “Micro-Fiction – 12

    • Sreesha Diva September 16, 2015 / 11:51 AM

      Oh yeah, I know him. I’ve read his book too.
      These were written as a part of a microfiction game on Twitter called Friday Phrases. I think I had even invited him to participate once (don’t remember for sure, I think I did; I keep inviting vss writers for FP all the time) He’s a bit silent on Twitter these days… *shrugs*


  1. Beat About The Book September 16, 2015 / 12:36 PM

    Ooooh Sreesha – this is good.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Rajlakshmi September 16, 2015 / 4:50 PM

    ohh the chill I felt at the end. Brilliant!!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Kaddu September 16, 2015 / 6:19 PM

    Woah! You are good at this, Sreesha! I’m always amazed by writers who can pack so much impact in so few words!

    Liked by 1 person

    • Sreesha Diva September 18, 2015 / 11:37 AM

      Thank you, Chicky 🙂 All thanks to this microfiction game on Twitter called Friday Phrases. Try it out, it’s a lot of fun 🙂


  4. inquisitivegeet September 16, 2015 / 9:00 PM

    Gosh..!!! I’m still absorbing it..!! Amazingly written Sreesha!


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