Transcendental Love

Standing across the banks
Of a river of separation
We stare at the same moon
Peaceful and serene, no reek of desperation

It is enough for me to know you’re there
It’s enough to see the moon shine on you
I know of the number of miles
But in thoughts, I am eternally with you

The moon and stars are forever together
But never do they come nearer to each other
And yet no love is lost between one and the other
My love for you, like the moon and stars
Transcends above all
And it will be cherished forever…


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18 thoughts on “Transcendental Love

  1. Jyotsna Bhatia November 23, 2013 / 3:31 PM

    <3 <3 Yes, Sreesha, I think it is possible to love someone so much that it doesn't matter if they don't love you back .. I know about that kind of love and glad that I know about that kind of love .. Lovely read :)

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  2. Sreesha Divakaran November 23, 2013 / 3:49 PM

    Thanks, Jyotsna.
    I believe it's a higher form of love. One that's beyond simplicities and complexities.. 🙂

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  3. Indrani November 23, 2013 / 4:10 PM

    Nice read. To love without getting the same in return… very matured.

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  4. MS November 24, 2013 / 3:43 AM

    Very Beautiful Poem! Loved it…

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  5. Soham Roy November 24, 2013 / 6:45 AM

    Nice…You echo a sentiment for long distance love..Similar to the Moon and the Star…Which I liked in particular…

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  6. Sreesha Divakaran November 24, 2013 / 6:57 AM

    Thanks, Soham! Yes you're right, it can be interpreted as a tale of a long distance relationship as well. 🙂
    Keep visiting!

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  7. gangsofedathua November 24, 2013 / 7:22 AM

    Hi Sreesha,
    Beautiful lines….
    Loved your description too in the indivine !
    It will surely evoke ” IVE BEEN THERE, DONE THAT” feeling in many readers !! (including your's truly)

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  8. Sreesha Divakaran November 24, 2013 / 7:36 AM

    Hey!! Thanks a lot!
    All emotions are but one and all people are but mirrors! 🙂
    Glad you liked it. Keep visiting!

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  9. anitaexplorer November 24, 2013 / 12:40 PM

    Really nice & beautiful poem, Sreesha!
    Are you really missing someone? Can feel the pain through your words…
    This should have been your entry for the Platinum Day of Love Contest- love is eternal like the Sun & Stars! 🙂

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  10. Sreesha Divakaran November 24, 2013 / 12:52 PM

    Aah, but the Platinum guys were looking for a story! 🙂
    Glad you liked it, Anita!
    And as for missing someone, haven't we all, at some point, known what it's like to miss someone so much that it actually hurts…

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  11. nothingprofound November 24, 2013 / 8:33 PM

    I love your analogy with the moon and the stars. But I wonder how long any person can sustain a love when they know they're not loved in return.

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  12. Sreesha Divakaran November 24, 2013 / 8:40 PM

    I believe for the present, it's better not to think about “how long” it'll last. It's all about contentment in the present:)

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  13. Helena Fortissima November 26, 2013 / 2:23 AM

    Beautiful poem, Sreesha. One-sided love is a great topic for poetry, but it's no way to live.

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  14. Sreesha Divakaran November 26, 2013 / 5:12 AM

    Oh, of course it's not, Helena! But, like you said, it inspires poetry! 😀

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