Abandoned


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The boy could not remember since when the pup had begun to accompany him everywhere. They were often sighted together, walking along the seashore, looking for scraps of food, looking at the colorful people, looking at the sunset. A companionship formed due to a mutual feeling of being abandoned at a young age.
Presently, he called after the pup as it ran towards the road; then ran after it. But he was a minute too late. He saw his only friend smashed to a pulp on the road while an inconsiderate driver drove away, the tyres leaving blood-soaked tracks.
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8 thoughts on “Abandoned

  1. allresourceupdates November 8, 2013 / 9:04 PM

    This is Sorrow indeed..I am imaging how the Kid is feeling with his only friend seeing in the Pool of Blood.. 😦

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  2. Abhijnan November 9, 2013 / 4:57 AM

    sad indeed.. You are becoming a pro at this genre..kepp it up πŸ™‚

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  3. propelsteps November 9, 2013 / 12:24 PM

    I don't prefer usually to read stories with sad endings. But you expressed the feeling of companionship and its value. Good.

    For my satisfaction I imagine these lines towards the end / the boy could feel some kind of a flubber on his face, “Aww, you are alive puppy!”, he woke up from the sand beds to resume their play. πŸ™‚

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  4. Sreesha Divakaran November 9, 2013 / 12:39 PM

    πŸ™‚ Yup, those lines left a smile on my face too. A kinder ending than the one I've written.

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